All Comments on 'While You're Sleeping...'

Very well crafted short piece of erotica. Outstanding descriptive writing. The scenario has been rendered by many other authors, but it is always a pleasure to read when this well written. The BDSM element, with the torn panties shoved in the girl's mouth, is a nice touch and heightens the eroticism of the piece. To work well short erotica like this needs to be very well written, and this submission does not disappoint.

Recommended.