All Comments on 'Whisky and Cigarettes Pt. 01'

A well written story; I liked the way the author built the story up and provided vivid imagery. I'll have to look for the next part in this series.

You turn a shapely and thrilling phrase, RedKirsten. This is exciting prose, a good cut above what's generally found on Literotica. The writing is tight, colorful and exciting. There's an elegance in your phrasing. It's delightful and exciting to read well written prose.

Please continue on with this story. Hannah and Kirsten are easy to fall in love with, you've made them so damned sexy and likable. Good character development, especially considering how short this story is.

Erin

Very very exciting.

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Deborah

Mmm, the story itself is like foreplay - a slow tantalising burn, that I hope will lead to orgasmic reading bliss

Great start to what I hope will continue to be a wonderful story.

I really loved the first chapter and am looking forward to more!