All Comments on 'White Dance'

Give me a break, try spell check.

It may be that English is not your first language (I hope!), but this is so full of grammar and spelling mistakes that it makes no sense whatsoever.

If you found so many mistaken spelling please write them down!!!!!!! By the way, I don't have mistakes with apostrophes that many writers have))))) And it's so hard to put russian writing into english, because russian is richer in any grammar, vocabulary, spelling and phonetics than english. It'd stupid to orgue that!!! English's vocabulary is so poor that the word "go" means any way of movements.

I'm an author of that and I can tell you my english is good enough, I'm certficated by British Council. I want to say I write in English, not American!!!!!!! Try to put many juicy phrases in english, but it's too hard to do that. I make less mistakes than many stories I wrote here. To tell the truth, 3 editors from literotica edit my stories before releazing them. If you want to et in touch me my ICQ is 310370930 and my e-mail is sluttish_88@yahoo.com