All Comments on 'White Heart Ch. 02'

So glad to see your new chapter and already looking forward to the next! Great story!

First Non-Human story I have read in Literotica, and enjoyed it immensely. Witing for more of White Heart...

This story is so wicked good! Your writing just pulls me into the story as if I were there, a bystander, watching it all unfold. I am betting Grace was a nun in training when she was turned. And so therefore she foregoes human blood. However the story goes and whatever turns it will take, I can assure you that I will avidly devour it and love it. You are very talented!!!!! Melanie

I am really enjoying your story, it flows so well and before you know it you are at the end of the chapter-drat!

Am sooooooo looking forward to the next instalment.

Best wishes

cuileann

My only suggestion would be making the chapters a little longer, but I know from experience how hard that can be. If it's a choice between quantity and quality you're making the right one. I'm really curious about how things are going to go with the little girl. I like how consistant your characters stay.

"Was she controlling him, using him?"

Of course she was. She is female! Excellent twists here and the self-healing hymen will no doubt catch on in years to come...well done TruantOne on testing the boundaries and coming up with original stuff. I'm sure you've got the ending all worked out and I can't wait. Just make sure it's unpredictable and I'll be happy!