All Comments on 'White Heart Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Interesting

It's an interesting world with the mix of supernatural & post apocalyptic, and I'm very curious about Liam. And Grace. Keep it up, I'm looking forward to more.

mechmanasmechmanasover 14 years ago
interesting

i LOVE the mix of alt history and sicfi very good so far, can not wait for more.

Bianca_SommerlandBianca_Sommerlandover 14 years ago
Darn it now you have me hooked!

And I've read all that there is. Hope you're planning on continuing soon. I'm enjoying the pacing, it doesn't feel like I've read as much as I have and I love it when a writer can do that. Shows talent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
very nice

i'm really enjoying this story. please continue it.

PerentiePerentieover 14 years ago
Well done and interesting

I look forward to learning more about the mysteries surrounding Grace and Liam, in particular just why they want each other so much despite apparently not using much in the way of magical enticements.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
The Best!

What a fabulous story!!!!

I'm absolutely hooked, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Well-written too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Next Chapter Please!!!!!

Realy love this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
good storyNO ENDING,,,,WASTE OF TIME

WHY OH WHY do you post when there is not an ending in sight,,,people come here to read and enjoy a COMPLETE story,follow you,and you posters just leave and dont seem to care,,so many on here anymore,its getting to be a waste of time to even bother anymore,,,

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Write More!

I love this tale!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Loving this story very much. Hope there is much more to come.

barepussloverbarepussloverover 5 years ago
Wow! And?

Nine Year, Well Is There More Or ?

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