All Comments on 'White Heart'

Very interesting so far, I'm looking forward to seeing where you'll go with this. A catchy twist on hunter/hunted angle. Just what type of paranormal is Liam? Does he naturally have a cruel streak, or has he become this way through his years hunting? He's very condescending about his "minions" to be a "human lover". Or is this more of the job coloring his actions?

Got and kept my interest throughout, very well done. I am looking forward to the back story and what happens next. Keep writing, you have talent!

I can't wait for the next chapter to found out what she is and if Liam will change his heart. good start on this story.

Not sure if this is my cup of tea. Thank you for writing though.

You're right, he's a bit of an anti-hero. Someone who needs a wake up call...and believe me it's coming to him!

This is my first foray in to 'darkness' so to speak. Thanks all for your valuable and welcome opinions. More to come soon...

One of the best-written stories I've read on the site. Thoroughly engrossing, believable within the genre, and I was only disappointed in learning that the story isn't yet complete!

So far, it's catchy. When are you planning the next chapter?

Please continue asap :)

I hope you submit the next chapter soon. I check almost daily to see if there's another part. I know it takes time to get writing ready for submission, especially when life is so busy. This is a great start and I look forward to the rest. :)

I'm glad I started reading this now when there's a few chapters up. Very interesting twist on a classic theme.

Some great new ideas here and a very mysterious and sexy tale. I like the way the borders between good and evil are deliberately vague,and first impressions may be wrong - just as in life. Highly erotic and varied sex and it may appeal to BDSM fans too. Well it appealed to me - may even convert me!

I understand he has a job to do and she is the enemy; but damn. Why he got to be so hard on the piece??? Yeah, he's got his issues and there are those that need doin'.

I say know the devil which he does but does he know his own devils?????

Demon thy name be lust.......recognize and move on or kill the source of the temptation.