All Comments on 'White Horses Ch. 03'

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FeistyJessFeistyJessalmost 18 years ago
Wow

I think I've found my new favorite author. You write like I dream. Please keep up the amazing work.

secretfreak0728secretfreak0728almost 18 years ago
this story just keeps getting better!!!!!!!!!!!!!

keep going we're all waiting for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Creative Writing 101

AWFUL! Who talks like this? Writes like this? The language is so inbelievable.

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayalmost 18 years ago
i guess everyone...

has "their" right to comment however. HOWEVER, im happy to see you are getting the right input of fan who enjoy this more than the negative, you have a way with words...excellent written with good solid story lines and damn hot, i am no author/editor by no means just a reader who knows what i and many others enjoy, i'd pay for this one if it was published in a book form...good story and thank you for keeping the chapters coming quickly, means a lot to fans who read you to be able to do just that...enjoy your writing while the stories are hot to them. Look forward to reading on. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

mjstevens74mjstevens74over 17 years ago
EXOTIC

Written LIKE A EXOTIC AUTOMOBILE FEELS WHEN DRIVEN, FITS LIKE SECOND SKIN, HANDLES LIKE A DREAM, EFFORTLESSLY EXQUSITE. I'LL BE LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE, MY GRATITUDE IN ADVANCE.

M.

SweetSnaffleSweetSnaffleabout 17 years ago
Delicious!

Fantastic, fantastic and yet still realistic. Not an easy task!

I love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Reads like a romance...

I love romance novels and this is definitely a good one... You probably should have placed it under romance instead... It was extremely well written. Keep up the GOOD work. Later luv

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Wow!

I really like this story :) You should continue it! It's really hot and really good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
oh my!

Yes... Please continue, you are very detailed but not so detailed that your audience looses interest. You have a gift. I'd lo ve to see more of your work and more of this series

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