by geministar
Kellan Lutz (of the Eclipse fame) Seriously?!! And don't get me started on the syntax and spelling errors. Plus, can you decide if you want to use present or past tense? Okay start; but very disjointed. It would require major improvement before I would even consider part 2.
COULD NOT TELL WHO WAS WHO, then his 6"er became an 8"er, seemed rushed, sorry to be critical./