All Comments on 'White Raven Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
chastity

yep and next week you will be a cuckold because you cant control your orgasm haha and after you have that on for very long you wont be able to get hard lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
chastity

I want so see when she is addicted to orgasms, keeping him trapped.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
5+!!!

A great loving story! Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Love it!

This is the kind of T&D/Chastity erotica I would feel comfortable sharing with my wife! Believable, romantic, and very sexy stuff.

Anyway, keep up the great work. I hope you have additional parts planned!

Greg

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More

I can hardly wait for the next chapter! 😃

OOAAOOAAalmost 5 years ago
Great story!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!

CorzineCorpsCorzineCorpsalmost 4 years ago
Question

Couldn't he have just masturbated in his car or in his workplace? How could his GF have noticed? Probably just his respect for her wishes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Stick to your day job !!

It's like you just gave up on the story in the middle of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Amazing

Please do a chapter 2!! Such a good story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Run dummy get the hell away from the bitch because in time she will be getting it from other men and you will be sucking their cocks for her and getting nothing for you don't need a whore for a girlfriend or wife better off just jerking off

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Beautifully Written Consensual Femdom

Loved this story! Found it after Daughter Holds the Keys posted and wanted to read everything you've written. 4+ years later, do you think you'll pick this story back up and give us more?

SimonLeBonMotSimonLeBonMotover 3 years ago
It was a good effort

While not having been in chastity, I have been with femdom women who like to control my sexual releases. It can be very erotic. Just being with a femdom woman doesn't mean she is going to cheat. Good effort on a subject not taken on often.

havaiistevehavaiistevealmost 2 years ago

GOD, I so need to cum!

fmp0927fmp0927about 1 year ago

Great story! Please write another chapter.

RegretsRegrets12 months ago

Thank You for this story. I will remember it and change the end game sometimes, so that she might produce handcuffs, maybe, explaining that he won’t be ready yet, to control himself Like having 3 wheels on his bike, she might say. Of course, he would realise then that she was taking this matter very seriously. Afterwards, locked again, he might have been invited to reward her for buying the presents they had used, by bringing her to orgasm. Women reading this might realise how rare it is that a man’s real needs are sensed by his partner, and made real.

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