All Comments on 'White Slaves of the Caribbean'

Learn thé différence between your / you're and et / it's, basic English:-)

"You're" is a contraction for "you are".

"Your" is the second person possessive.

"It's" is the contraction for "it is."

"Its" is the possessive.

I believe I got it right everywhere, but maybe not. Please let me know where the mistakes are.

I like your Story. It is fun to read. But it ends rather abruptly. Please continue.

You are right--I should finish this story. But I'm writing another one instead. And then I've got other things to write, so it may not get done for awhile.

Thanks for your kind words.

I am looking forward to reading your other story then

You write well, but after reading several of your stories, I realize you can't finish a story..... Finish the Story