by a_random_user
It kept me riveted to my chair and hope you will keep going with the story.I know these kind of stories are not for everyone but for those of us who are into them. I say, keep them cuming
I liked the basic idea of the story, especially as it emulated so many Karen Kay story themes. I didn't particularly like the format, set out as it was like a screen play. Just my personal opinion.
I loved the discussion narrative approach...with both Liz and Steve expressing their feelings. Often stories are one-sided, with one perspective and viewpoint, this however is a true cuckold couples adventure. Hope you have at least three more chapters of erotic excitement in store for us.
It would wondeful if Dana and Jon at some point also visit the resort.
Where is the next episode? Its now 2012 and nothing moving.
"Your excellency, Ibo is looking for someone to double team the Jew girl"
Hilarious. Naked & fucking some idiots' wives he sticks to the formal in this dialogue. hehe
While discussions was hot.. and very well written
Hotgirlwifelover733
Would you continue this story is love to hear about dana and jon signing on for a year at the resort and maybe a repeat performance for elizabeth and stephen
I really like this story. It would seem, however, since so much time has passed it will not be continued.
It would be great if this were continued. Or perhaps the author would message me, and I'll write a continuation? (In my own style, might not be as good!)