by Acal
excellent story looking forward to future installments of the series
thank you for posting
That was an enjoyable read,liked it.Looking forward to yhe next book.Thank you
to the continuation of this series. You created a very hot female demon who got what she wanted. It will be interesting to follow the life of a male demon and see what "troubles" he get into. Hope the wait isn't to long.
This comment is in reference to All 6 "Whiteout" Chapters. I've read a great many stories on this and other "on-line" sites, an awful lot of them being very interesting and very well written. Some truly good enough, if bulked up / increased in length and content, to probably qualify for publishing - as in "books sold in stores, etc." - (at least in my opinion). At this point in time, my number one choice to be included in this group of great stories is "Whiteout". Please keep up the fantastic work and keep those stories (including more about Helena and Hunter) coming. Thank You. LEKarchner