All Comments on 'Whitewash High Ch. 13'

Though this a relatively short chapter, it was fucking fantastic to see Amanda's corruption take a big leap like that! And I like where you're going with this flashback bit. :)

That Amanda sure have some craves... that was hot and interesting, what she will do whe she realizes that was guided on purpuse. And now the asshole its out of jail. I have a little doubt, in the beggining i assume that Nik was either former military or someone in his family was, because its evidently that he doesnt depend solely in his body frame in the fights that he was involved, since that look improbable... do you plan to make him learn martial arts with Anri? maybe its not a plot point important for you, but i do think that some explanation will be helpful, since until now, Nik its showing a good level of tactical and analytical thinking.

Good chapter.

To answer everyone's question, it will be coming in a series of its own. I'm trying to create this series like a book, so you get a sprinkling of Nik's past in this 'book' and then his past gets a whole dedicated run of chapters on its own.

Really enjoying the series so far. Not enough good reverse-interracial stories out there. I'm really interested to see when you get she-pimp suzy into the lineup. Anyway it's your story, just wanted to say enjoying the story so far keep doin' what you're doin'.