All Comments on 'Who is the Real Alex? Ch. 04'

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desjdesjalmost 6 years ago

Glad you updated hope for more soon I hope she keeps fighting doesn't he realize that by him doing this that she's just going to believe what she heard is true and she nothing but a toy to him and that why I want her to fight please update again soon

HobomonarchyHobomonarchyalmost 6 years ago
Still going strong. Wish the chapters were longer.

Response to Dezj: he does realize that she will think that. He just doesn't care. She is a toy to him, hence the complete lack of her input into the rules. He wants to break her so she doesn't ever feel like resisting him on anything ever again. Pretty much the definition of a sex toy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
the key is to submerge the small part of you that wants to fight.

Survival is the only thing that matters, not making a stand that will get you killed. Be the happy puppet, submit, call him master or God or Hank Hill if that is what he wants....until the opportunity arises to escape. And it will.

The only way to not be broken is to be mostly broken.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Love it

I love this, please continue!

notusuallyshynotusuallyshyalmost 6 years ago
Better

This story is better than most current stories on offer here at Lit, I fail to understand how others are gaining more votes but hey ho the mystery of people's preferences!

I'm enjoying this series, it's well written and credible enough for a enjoyable fantasy my only wish is for longer chapters.

Liztaylor66Liztaylor66over 5 years ago
Wow

Where is chapter 5?! This is amazing

HeyjessHeyjessalmost 3 years ago

such an amazing story. I know it’s been a few years, but please finish!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

just a little spank and no dinner and now she is ready to be a whore for him

too weak and wimp for a fighter she should have tried jumping thats the only way to get that mafia dude piss his pants and to respect her or she could have gone on a hunger strike and took some beatings

i liked mia till 3rd chapter but the moment she nodded i was confirm she will never have my sympathies

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