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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
* * * *

Needs some anal!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Terrible

Just terrible, other words fail me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The only word i can think of for this story is GREAT!!!!

G R E A T! Made me cum twice

papabeardougpapabeardougover 8 years ago
Super job and story 5*

Great 5* right here, awaiting next chapter

PB

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Skip the periods

Why not skip the periods and just write one 2601 word sentence instead of breaking it to into 96 sentences. It couldn't make it any harder to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sounds real.

Sounds very plausible so far. Keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Arrgg

I just dont understand cuckoldry

SouthernSamanthaSouthernSamanthaover 8 years ago
Waiting for sequel

Even though the sentence structure was distracting, it was a good story and I look forward to seeing what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Thanks!

What happens next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Joys brother

He should have gotten the tape or memory cards from the cam corders before he left

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