All Comments on 'Who Knew?'

There simply are no words to express the pain you've captured in this beautiful short. Read it before, just read it again, will most likely revisit at some point down the line.

Haunting.

There's a phrase I use when describing stories like this

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"Thanks, I'm depressed now. Wonderfully written. 5 stars. I hated it."

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That about sums it up.

Wow! Breathtakingly simple and devastating. Beautifully done.

Thank you

That hurt. 5*.

don't know how to vote. Vote on writing its a 5. Vote on the subject (lost love, suicide) a 1.

Very sad ending!

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Wow! I listened to the song first, and got the impression that the guy leaving was an asshole dumping her.

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Your story took it into a direction I certainly wasn’t expecting, and did it very economically and powerfully.

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When I listen to the song now, the pain in the singer’s voice now seems much more profound. As the last few lines of the song get softer and softer, I now see her falling to her death in my mind’s eye.

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Depressing as shit, but oh, so well done. 5*

Literal chills.

I know this song. I love this song. I saw it as a death too, not that he left her. So for me this was spot on. Beautifully, hauntingly, perfectly written.

Thank you for this one.

-SK

Shoot. This story is going to make a wreck me for the rest of the day. Even though I knew what was coming it still pulled on my heart string before cutting it like with scissors. So well written, a deserving 5*

Wow, I never saw it coming

Wow, just... wow. I do not know how you did so much in a piece that is so short. I will be think of this for a long time. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟