by SmallTitFan
love your writing. keep them coming! any chance you'd write a sequel to "Wie, best friend, and sister? its a great story - you could easily write another chapter!!!
THANKS!!!
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I gave it a four. It would have received a five except for that Macy slip.
well written - very "seductive" story. sexy and erotic. can't wait for the next chapter.
Would love to read, and hope there are, future chapters.
A couple minor errors - it's never explained when he took off his boxers.
Partway toward the end, he calls Lizi by the name "Macy" (from your other series). But good solid core.
Hope to see more of this story in the future. Enjoyed it much.Thanks
I can see the hand jobs and blow jobs and even having her pussy eaten out.
However letting the FIRST GUY FUCKING HER ASS.
That was a negative.
Still I can't wait for the next chapter.
Good read. Only unanswered question is Who is Macy? Sounds like Daddy's got a side piece. . .
Giving alcohol to a 19 year old girl in Florida is illegal, just like in the rest of the US, where the legal drinking age is 21 in every state. Not only that, but her mother is a recovering alcoholic, so she could have a genetic predisposition to the same problem. Really, really, fucked up and I stopped reading right there.
hint, only an idiot would start out by finger-banging a virgin. Please don't be one of those authors that think a woman's hymen is buried somewhere deep inside. That would make you an incel, or best, a virgin yourself.