All Comments on 'Who Seduced Who?'

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scipioparkinsscipioparkinsover 6 years ago
Well thought out.

Well told. A good horny story. Thanks for sharing.

goducks1goducks1over 6 years ago
another 5 stars!

love your writing. keep them coming! any chance you'd write a sequel to "Wie, best friend, and sister? its a great story - you could easily write another chapter!!!

THANKS!!!

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Slut4daddie36DSlut4daddie36Dover 6 years ago
Oh so good!

Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Who’s Macy

Lizi or Macy?

RodThrustinRodThrustinover 6 years ago
oops

I gave it a four. It would have received a five except for that Macy slip.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Loving the Jacksonville landmarks

DUUUUUUUUVAAAALLLLLL!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yep

Lizi or Macy, seems like you either mixed up your stories or...

goducks1goducks1over 6 years ago
great story

well written - very "seductive" story. sexy and erotic. can't wait for the next chapter.

bayouxbayouxover 6 years ago
Happy Together as the song describes

Would love to read, and hope there are, future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

"Who seduced whom?" is the correct title.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wrong name

A couple minor errors - it's never explained when he took off his boxers.

Partway toward the end, he calls Lizi by the name "Macy" (from your other series). But good solid core.

sabra16023sabra16023over 6 years ago
A great story

Hope to see more of this story in the future. Enjoyed it much.Thanks

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
A touching story except for her ass FUCKING first.

I can see the hand jobs and blow jobs and even having her pussy eaten out.

However letting the FIRST GUY FUCKING HER ASS.

That was a negative.

Still I can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The door is open for part 2

Good read. Only unanswered question is Who is Macy? Sounds like Daddy's got a side piece. . .

racfguyracfguyabout 4 years ago

"my dick was harder than Chinese arithmetic."

What a great line!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Nice story

Really enjoyed this one. Hope to see part two soon

chairfanchairfanabout 3 years ago

Hope we get a sequel.

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Next chapter please. AAAA++++

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Giving alcohol to a 19 year old girl in Florida is illegal, just like in the rest of the US, where the legal drinking age is 21 in every state. Not only that, but her mother is a recovering alcoholic, so she could have a genetic predisposition to the same problem. Really, really, fucked up and I stopped reading right there.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

hint, only an idiot would start out by finger-banging a virgin. Please don't be one of those authors that think a woman's hymen is buried somewhere deep inside. That would make you an incel, or best, a virgin yourself.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Ease up with the criticism people, its a story!

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