All Comments on 'Who Watches the Watchmen Ch. 02'

....but I have lot of complaints against you.

I have been reading you since long, you have a habit of building up the plot a lot in two to three parts then some material and the story move and then you leave it hanging and disappear.

This one is also just a built up in two chapters and I bet you have no story in it nor you have any plausible ending.

It would be nice if you put some story in it in place of dragging a sex scene into three four chapters.

Your stand alone story the last you published was good.

I hope you take this in right sprit and make this story a nice read.

You my lord are a genius....

Please start a new story too....

Something on lines of a forced cuckold if possible.

This can't be the end man!

keep going man..... awesome series.. so erotic....

Please keep writing this, very hott story!

I am a huge fan of yours and have read all your stories....outstanding is an understatement for this particular story,great build up,awesome writing and sexually explosive scenarios....keep writing,rated 5 stars.

PS - Please make menaka wear an extreme low saree below navel and skimpy blouse to finally seduce dara one night till her husband reaches another shore...

The temperature is soaring to record new heights!! Aurelius1982 - super stuff!!

Good stuff aurelius!

You need to write this story through

menaka's perspective also