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jenorma2012over 7 years ago5 stars
I though it was good, the build up is really good also zero only thing is Vanessa be seems full of herself except towards the end but still in all a good start
rml65over 7 years agoGood start!
I think you should most definitely see this story through to the end! Has a really good start!
HypeBeastover 7 years agoAuthorHey jenorma2012
Yeah so I was kind of trying to portray Vanessa as someone who thinks she's a "know it all", filthy rich, spoiled teen, that kind of stuff. And as to why you might have to wait and see.
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