All Comments on 'Whole New Slave Game Ch. 05'

This was about as plodding and clinical a story as I think I've ever read. While it is by no means poorly written, it is also about as erotic as a political documentary. There is a big difference between writing about sex and writing a story that's erotic. This succeeds in the first, but fails miserably at the second.

Glad to read that Laurel was branded again. I think that many of her customers would comment on the irrefutable proof of slavery that brand provides.