All Comments on 'Whoosh, Bang! Ch. 01'

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Very good build up and characterization, enjoyed the almost backhanded way they worked around to it. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.