by Stripemoff
I don't make many comments about some of the stories I read but I felt this was an enjoyable story to read. Only found one fault through the story and that was you used the word women instead of woman, but only once. It is typically American as I have heard it and read it that way many times. Well done. Giving it top rating.
Hopefully, this was the beginning of a very interesting storyline. Waiting for more.