All Comments on 'Whore Ch. 01'

The reason for no feedback is that this is a really bad story, in fact it is boring. You gave no background so it had no character. She is a slut not a whore. Most whores are druggers so they don't help each other, in real life they fight for territory. Whores don't kiss. Whores cleanup for their next john, they don't walk around with cum running down their legs.

I am now going to read your next chapter, hopefully it will be better.

loved the story about you geting gangbanged as a virgin. loved this one as well... the simple way you tell your story is very hot, please dont change your style... you said that this story never happened, but you could easily make it happen if you want...also the best part is when you get filled with cum, so why would you want to use condoms....if you ever decide to become a whore for real you would probably be strangled to death by some john long before AIDS could ever kill you..... you know you want it you slut, don't you?

who is he to tell you its a bad story??????? Its your fantasy... and yes there is a difference betwen a slut and a whore, but I dont think he knows what it is........ as far as your fantasy goes... Be It, Don't just Dream It.

awesome story love it even if its old now. reading this takes me back to my first time. must read the next part. great writing.