All Comments on 'Who's in Charge? Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
To Rushed

Slow down some. The idea of putting her in her place was good but the scenes jumped into sex to fast. He need to tease her for several days, spanking, exposure, BJ before full sex. Part of the thrill is her reluctance at first followed by the gradual acceptance of her new place.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Turn-off

Putting something that's been in an arse directly into somebody's mouth is so unhealthy that it wipes all arousal away.

(And if he loved his wife, Beverly, that much,why didn't he get up and made her the coffee she needed for her headache?)

The psychology of this story seems construed by somebody who has read too much bad porn.

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