All Comments on 'Why'

That is a big part of this for you, I'm just glad I'm not you, glad your happy.

Where's the answer?

along with, WTF!??- Are you stupid? Why is the husband always a fall guy etc etc.

It has an interesting appeal. As a story, well written, as a plot idea it can work, just have to see how it plays out. From my limited experience, there are distinct differences in on line dom/sub play and real time. I will be interested in seeing how well you keep up the tension.

but I'm interested were this is going. I hate wimp cuckolds but I really want to know how this will end. I have not raised my expectations but although the husband is a submissive he hasn't submited 100%.

This male humiliation self disrespect excites you even tho you are gay - puzzling - but then you must be weak and need others to push you around due to your numb jaded libido.<P>

Not much to look forward to is there.

"Why?" Why did this author crawl out from under the pissing rock to grace the pages of Lit with this dog shit? Written from a 5th grade level and with so many plot holes, it almost whistles in the wind. Author - get a clue, it sucks! Debra & Wayne

Let her go into the trap. Can't believe you paid 100. to watch your wife. It is a good story and nicely written. She will find out that all they are interested in is making money off of her. Thanks for sharing

Interesting set-up, I'd like to see where this goes. Hopefully, it won't degenerate into your standard cuckold story.

This shows promise - keep writing!

I am fed up with whimpering authors who don't have the courage of their convictions. I haven't read this first part, Have no desire to risk being left in the lurch yet again. Just finish the dam thing, if people like it then fine, if they don't, that's fine too. The important thing is you have done your job. If you can't manage a story without pats on the back, then you should just quit. Notice I have not complained about theme, plot, subject or genre. I wouldn't be here if I didn't want what you have the talent to deliver. Instead of worrying over someone complaining or not bolstering your ego with positive feedback you should concentrate of those of us who just want a decent completed story. I have sent personal feedback of a similar nature. I hope you take it to heart. j

Who this turnes on, would love to see a profile of a man who sat at his computer and jacked off to this. Gay, submissive, but not a A type personality. I guess it takes all kinds.

Inept and worthless. "1" !

the cocksmoker living in that closet, try to sate your demented homosexual IR and Bestiality urges in the proper category comment-boy, not going to find your fetish here in LW.

Especially stupid scammed ones. I bet ch. 2 reveals that the wife was in on it the whole time. We'll see...

a rudely buggered cornhole, he smoked the bulbous cock, betrayed!

I dislike stories where people don't appear to have an IQ above 10 between them, It simply makes the story unbelievable.

For four years that you do not write, I hope that in the meantime you died of cancer very painful

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Nothing erotic about this dung.

You never answered the question why? I personally think you just gay and your wife is your beard.

If he posts it, have him arrested. You do know it's illegal, right? And if his wife is about to get fucked by another man, why does he care? Their marriage is over. She's a cheating slut. Done. Ugly story about stupid people.

You start throwing around words like "master" and you're in a BDSM story. SO this trash is in the wrong category. Since he recorded the show he went straight to his attorney. The divorce papers were prepared and then he had the police arrest the men for attempted blackmail. They went down for 15 years and his wife left their marriage with her clothes and her maiden name. Stupid, poorly thought out garbage.

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No one cares about these characters. Wife is just a whore trying to fool people. Husband isn’t any type of man, just a wimp and pathetic little sissy boy. Anything bad that happens to either is just karma. Just another one of hundreds of stupid cuck stories. Are there no writers who know any real men or women? Or is this just a gathering of twisted and sick souls.

When delving into a world where people use the term "Master" its not a kink, again like some other supposed "lifestyles" there IS a certain degree of mental instability involved.

It is actually an issue that should be looked into.

Is there a professional pathway, or is it just a self deluding action to title yourself as a master? Just another way to prey on the mentally challenged idiots of society.