by julybear7
was anticlimactic...nothing in the ending...just a big "the end" basically.
I enjoyed it up until that single point though.
just my 2 cents really.
I would like to have read what he did to his mother.All of the erotic details.
Shame that it wasn't written.
I really didn't get this story at all.
It made no sense the whole way through, maybe if you rewrote it and added some more sexual content and a better story line it would get 5 stars instead of 1
ending, and only sort of vaguely telegraphed by the way Joanne responded to his request that she accompany him.
Solidly written and quite descriptive.