All Comments on 'Why He Fucked His Momma'

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guildmanguildmanover 13 years ago
good until the end

was anticlimactic...nothing in the ending...just a big "the end" basically.

I enjoyed it up until that single point though.

just my 2 cents really.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
Missed a good opportunity for some good visual sex.

I would like to have read what he did to his mother.All of the erotic details.

Shame that it wasn't written.

MrLurkerMrLurkeralmost 13 years ago

This was like an un-satisfying quickie ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

It was a little bit weird. but kinda good.

TakeatumblewithmeTakeatumblewithmeabout 9 years ago
This made no sense

I really didn't get this story at all.

It made no sense the whole way through, maybe if you rewrote it and added some more sexual content and a better story line it would get 5 stars instead of 1

Kitist02Kitist02over 8 years ago
Neat trick

ending, and only sort of vaguely telegraphed by the way Joanne responded to his request that she accompany him.

Solidly written and quite descriptive.

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