All Comments on 'Why Leili Hates Witches Ch. 01'

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jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 8 years ago
Oh Gods YES!

That was perfect. Danm, if only I had the stamina.

Today's been a great morning so far. Thanks

PornGoddess2PornGoddess2over 8 years ago
minor point

A brassiere is an over-the-shoulder bolder-holder.

A "brazier" is something you burn charcoal in.

Also, Cilla Black is a singer. "Cilia" are wiggly things on tentacles.

doinstuffdoinstuffabout 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Changes submitted. The irony is that wearing a brazier would probably provide better chest protection.

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