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The author has no knowledge of proper slang for this kind of story, or basic word meanings. Pure stupid to use "spunk" that means a form of behavior when the accepted slang is "cum" for semen.

The previous commenter obviously knows less than the author he publicly tried to shame. Spunk is slang for cum. You may want to search the term to see that you are the one who knows not of what you say. With that being said, the story was actually entertaining. Entertaining because these are just stories to take our minds off lift for awhile. I doubt the author is trying to be the next Steinbeck.

You're reading a quick fantasy story with multiple references to the male ejaculate. Cum to the white collar, spunk to the blue collar. Lighten up, Francis.