All Comments on 'Wicked Amusement Ch. 07'

As always a literal masterpiece. I really enjoy reading your stories, they are always a fluent read :)

But what do you mean by 'penultimate'? Will you fulfill all our deepest wishes with your next chapter? :P (Please don't end Sea Slimes with the next chapter yet :/)

"Same procedure as last year?"

Almost feel bad that I can't say more, but you just do a fantastic job every time so there's not really much to comment on.

In this chapter what I liked especially was the hypnotic induction, the whole breast thing and the milktitties and cow thing. Very hot. Not something you can use all the time without it getting boring, but if there's a busty bimbo who needs hypnotizing in the future it may be something that can be repeated.

There are two chapters remaining in Sea Slimes—the next is the penultimate, meaning second-to-last. :)

Not really much to say. Your writing is great, plot is always interesting and the hypnotic submission scene was as arousing and great as ever. I have to agree with voidgolem. I especially love how you avoided using the word bimbo until the end when she'd given up. We were all thinking it, how could we not as Ceffyl led our minds irresistibly down the submissive path, letting our mind fill with the unspoken word and its implications... I found that just as hot as and more well-written than an induction filled with the word. Keep it up!