by RedHairedandFriendly
A wonderful conception of an old fairytale. I only wish the ending had been a happy one.
...has been mentioned in the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout.
Don't know how I missed this before Red. What a fantastic take on the traditional tale! Very well done.
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What an amazing tale, a wonderful twist on the classic fairy tale. I think I will find myself reading this one twice, a truly beautiful story.
I am stunned. That was such a harsh ending. It could have been happier but it did not make it any less of a great story. You are such a great writer.
I dont usually read sci-fi stories but i have a love for wolves..i must say your writing talent is amazing..such a beautiful love story with such a sad ending yet that is how most love is in real life as well...we love we loose. After this story im seeking more of your writings. Keep up the wonderful story telling you have true talent.
I honestly think you're one of the best writers on this site! Thank you for the stories!
This was such a wonderful story. You kept the reader well informed from the begging to the end. I'm glad that they at least died together, each knowing that they loved each other. This twist is a lot better compared to the old childhood tale. ;) This was the best. Thank you.
Very hot but i think it was sad that they both died at the end rather than living happily ever after. But i suppose that is just what life is like. :)
in life as in stoies there are not happy ending. but we can wish for is a happy beging and go from there. good story. thank you.
Just because life doesn't normally have a happy ending doesn't mean stories can't! I had liked this story until the part at the end. : (
it was ok. you just left too much unresolved. will Radulphus be a werewolf? is the grandmother ok? what happened to Red's mother? and you still left typos