All Comments on 'Wife Conceives Ch. 01'

by loboss2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
1 STAR

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
i take it

what he really wants is a divorce with no kids

katranmankatranmanover 13 years ago
really bad

Pathetic. If zero was an option that's what this deserves.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
The worst part?

It was that threat at the end, to continue this shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
As lame

as it gets.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
-5

-5... that much is the story worth... maybe even less...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
not my idea

Not my idea of a story i would like but just the same maybe you will fall before the next chapter and not be able to write, now that brings a smile to my face.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Why?

Why is it the vast majority of stories on this site involving sex between black men and white women are pure crap, but that is not the case for stories involving sex between white men and black women?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
awesome

Listen, the husband didn't want to do the deed and couldn't get it up. What was Toni to do. She wants to be pregnant and doesn't matter what color to her. Husband also gave Xavier permission to use his wife. At least now if she wants other kids she knows where to go and they will be brothers from the same mother. Nicely crafted and written. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Liked it!

I'm more of a "suprise!" when it comes to big black cocks instead of being semi blunt about but I enjoyed your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
1 star.

I would love to be a fly on the wall when the husband has to explain to ALL his friends, family, co-workers and everyone else that he meets about how he was cuckolded and allowed black men to fuck his wife for a week all so his wife could get have little black bastards. I bet his co-workers will laugh at him. His friends will disown him hopefully his family will disown him and he will be forced to choose between a black whore/slut that fucks any and all blacks she comes in contact with but never him and all the little bastards that she will drop out of her blacked disgusting cunt. But it's okay the brothers will take her in and put her to good use in a black whore house where all white married women that fuck black men and she will be fucking and sucking and breeding like all good white married fucked up women do. Then the wimp cuckold asshole kills himself through the utter shame he brought on his family.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Toni is obviously one greedy, black cock loving slutwife - fucking excellent! Not the best story I've ever read, but good all the same.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Just a stupid story trying tomake black men look superior to white men and white husbands in particular. Toni will find out soon enough , when Blake and his brother are pimping her skanky diease ridden cunt out for money, that all they really want her for into be a crack whore. She will earn money for them while they sit thier lazy asses at home collecting well fare checks

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hmm

Your attitude sounds a bit iffy to me, unless you're trying to sound like a jumped up racist? Your descriptions could do with some work too, bit tacky in places i feel

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
re: Anon-Why?

Could it be that mostly women write romantic interracial stories between a black woman and a white man. Example, on this site the highest scoring interracial writers are female, "PepperPace"-"Soular"-"angelicsounds"-"nerd4music" and others. They have one thing in common they avoid trashy cliche stories and most all score in the high 4.5-5.0 range. For some reason most IR writers, especially the new writers, portray white women as sluts and whores and their mates as wimps. That's their fantasy, and if turns them on, so be it. I read comments before actually reading a story. Good comments with high scores are a good indicator that a story is worthy to be read. When the opposite is encountered, I move on. ML

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
It may be the author's fantasy

But not too realistic. I couldn't believe in the storyline and that made it hard to get into the story.

There has to be a little reality in a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Story sucks.

Look, I love Hot Wife stories, meaning stories where the wife has sex with other men. but I don't like these wimp husband stories. No love or respect between the husband and wife in stories like this. Not my style.

Rockyderek_caRockyderek_caover 13 years ago
Krap

Just more interracial gay fantasy poorly dressed up as loving wives.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wimp crap

What's with the flood of wimps and cuckoos in stories. Oh I guess it's because the real men a busy fucking which takes an hour or more which the wimps jack in 30 sec and can get back to writing their crap fantasies about being abused even more.

Try Therapy, not literature.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
crazy animal

what a deranged, depraved, disgusting, animal! Not fit for human society.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
loboss2 ..

.. goboss2 ...... away that is .. and take your cuck / wimp stories with you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
If It Ain’t White, It Ain’t Right

If It Ain’t White, It Ain’t Right

TigersmanTigersmanover 9 years ago
Stressed out

I can understand how a couple could try for years to have a baby only to fail. All to often the daily stressors at the work place, having the relatives keeping asking when the woman is going to get pregnant plus seeing all her friends having babies takes a toll on the couple. In this case even the doctor added to stressors by saying the couple needed to have sex as often as possible. Talk about stress. Itis no wonder the husband could not perform. As for Xavier fucking the drunken passed out wife that was nothing more than rape.

marypatmnmwfmarypatmnmwfover 8 years ago
marypat mn wife

love this story wish it was me

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Lipman

Piszę o realu w moim małżeństwie - moja żona została pierwszy raz zerżnięta przez czarnego jak węgiel wielkiego,53 letniego murzyna mając 19 lat.Teraz ma 27 i mamy piątkę jego dzieci i jesteśmy najszczęśliwszym małżeństwem na świecie.Moja żona chodzi z szóstym czarnym brzuszkiem a szczęśliwa cyfra żony - to 9 i myślę,że tyle dzieci stary,siwy i dosyć gruby murzyn jeszcze jej narucha.i zawsze będę ją kochał do szaleńswa

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