All Comments on 'Wife Shared by College Boys Pt. 03'

She finally gets a gang bang! Hope she performs for hubby when he returns. Surely he would love seeing her fucking the group, then plunging into her cummy pussy himself while the guys watched.

Who are you? A pubescent teen or an ugly old bag?? Your crap is only laughable!!!

The arrival and cookout moved along fine even if somewhat formatted to fit sex story expectations.

This married woman's acquiescence to multi-partner sex came too easily for me.

Was the last guy named Todd or Scott. Very confusing!

Who was the last guy in the room?

Do you even think this is good writing? and a good plot? and erotic?

For your information you can find people who like to pee on their noodles somewhere but that wont make them taste better. There people who will tell you this story is their favorite just because they can and some might praise your talent. just remember that perfume is to sniff, not to drink so take false flattery for what it is worth. Read some of the better authors stories and see how they build real characters and use emotion suspense and some reality to make their stories live, not die premature deaths like this one din between the third and last paragraphs of your first chapter. I am afraid there is no salvation for this mess. Just let us write our own ending because only FTDS could finish this mess acceptably.

at this point how many are even reading this for enjoyment any more

or are they like me spell bound looking at this train wreck of words

I feel like it started off well enough in the first chapter, it has since gone completely downhill. The words bring said between the characters seem unrealistic. Names are being confused, not enough detail if you plan on making another chapter, put in some more time into it. Unless you don't really care about how good your product is.

...if there's further chapters, cool. If not, also cool.

She enjoyed her multiple partners as much as they enjoyed her. I worked Christmas break in Aspen and let three college boys have their way with me on three consecutive nights. It was equally passionate and glorious.

It looks like one a-hole is posting all the bad comments. Delete them and keep writing!

I hope that wasn't the end. Plenty of possible story left, keep going.

Her husband to be be the fifth guy who walks through the door. If not that's good. Good story.

She has said several times that no one will find out. I wonder if she will forget to empty the wastebasket and the husband finds the used condoms.

She goes home and thinks her husband won't notice? Come on. At least TRY and think things through. This was just awful,

Looks like the ass wipe is back, bitching about the comments again. This fucktard actually thinks all the anon comments are made by one person. what a stupid jerk. go fuck yourself and stop your fucking whining

those that don't think so, can kiss my, you know what

Two decent set up stories and this is how you pay it off?

Todd enjoyed her so much he changed his name to Scott? What happened to her "condoms only" rule with Todd/Scott?

Question for Anonymous who "worked break in Aspen". What was your husband's reaction when you told him about your "adventure"?

To the author: you started out like maybe this wasn't going to be the usual "wife enjoys gang bang" from strangers, and maybe come up with something different. You didn't. Another chapter? I don't see the purpose.

Really, and she doesn't have every STD known to the animal kingdom...

Older, married woman w/horny, college guys; who will get with just about anything with a heartbeat​ and, they haven't ALL came down with something... Such unrealistic drivel.

Remember, the sewer rats will cry foul, this is just a fantasy, where nobody gets any diseases. I guess realism is not a strong point for many who read this category.

I remember a well publicised court case of a married woman having sex with a college boy, she was charged with being a paedophile, she is probably still doing gaol time. I sure hope rutting with a pimply boy was worth it. Hahahahaa 'sucked in' stupid slut! How do you think the parents of the boys in this story will react? I found with my sons, that sooner or later they will have a 'tell all' session. BTW 1*

Your score is 3.63 as I'm writing this. That's a really good score at this stage with all the trolls going nuts. I predict a score of at least 4.5 in a few days. My score of 5 stars will help it get there.

illiterate cuck shit.

Hard working hubby being punished by a cheating cunt. She could threaten with divorce by fucking other only makes her a lying cheating sneaky whore pig. For the college guys it's great. We all at that age hope to score with an older woman . Leaving me out of it I'll just say I know quite a few that have been lucky enough to live that out. A friend who worked for this guy as a 19 year old was fucking his wife every week when he went for his pay. He was an aggressive kid so she caught him looking at her tits with no bra and went to say something he just stuck his hand in squeezed her nipple and kissed her. Once he knew she didn't protest he pushed her to her knees and rubbed his dick on her lips. He did it all with her for over a year before the husband walked in on them . To add insult to injury pulling his dick from her ass and naked the husband attacked him. Now the poor hubby got his ass kick from a naked 20 year old who was fucking his wife in the ass when he walked in. He beat him pretty bad , broken jaw, nose, two black eyes and badly bruised ribs before she laid across hubby to stop the assault. He spent two days in the hospital and he the kid went back to the house and fucked her the next day but she ended it there telling him she loved fucking him but was gonna beg her husband to not divorce her. Six months later they were moving together but talked her into a blow job one last time. For some reason she couldn't resist him

First of all my main criticism is that these were posted as four separate stories when really they were just one story. And I do agree somewhat with the idea that she felt Justified having back-to-back sex with these guys just because her husband had to go for something you really had to do while she gets to stay home all day comma is a bit disturbing. But the store itself is pretty hot as far as the sexual part goes. Sometimes though when people write stories that incorporate an emotional side of it .

it turns into a mixed reaction.

I also don't understand the criteria of allowing bareback with the last guy and the fact that her husband obviously satisfies her in other ways and did a good job with her any early part of story.

Did Todd suddenly become Scot? Todd poked his head in the door & she started calling him Scot??? Where was Athur Eric & Paul ? Couldn't be bothered to read after that - perhaps take up knitting cos sure as sh.t you ain't no good at writing !

I wish I had of been the last guy. She was a pretty easy fuck. She new she wanted cock, she is a good wife, Hubby has to work and she needs cock. 5 *****

Trashy story about a trashy cheating whore.

I see you haven’t posted anything since this little series so I hope the trolls with the trousers round their ankles haven’t put you off. The Todd/Scott mixup happens sometimes, I wouldn’t be too worried. It was a good story and you’re a good writer. Do some more!

I gave this one five stars. The writer of this story tends to repeat words sometimes. But hey, most of us who write stories here on this site are amateurs anyway. Your setup scenarios I believe to be excellent. Don’t worry about the haters, they’re not worth any of our time.