All Comments on 'Wife Submitted By Intruder'

For a first time this is very well written. Please don't stop writing as I hope you have a lot of stories left in you to write. While you did get me aroused you might want to add a little more description otherwise I can't wait to read more.

That was so hot! I wish a sexy intruder like that would break into my house;)

She very slowly but not too shyly took the head of my Dick in her open lips which she had just coated with perfectly applied red lipstick. Immediately I sprang to a rock hard on..The RED Lipstick visible on my Dick was such an uneapected Turn-on. She then slowly took half of my dick for the first time leaving a bright RED ring around my Cock and then took it all & somehow took some down her throat. She was an expert with her toungue and lips which indicated to me she must have had much experience It was the best blow job I ever had & I mean including Hookers.She really loves swallowing and savoring the taste in her mouth. I blasted a huge load in her throat & hungry mouth. She actually sucked it dry for 10 more minutes. She then said how much she loves a Big & Hard cock in her mouth. When did this begin? She was a PRO & loved the taste of cum in her mouth throat & tummy. Is this a really stupid question? Has she been sucking strange cocks off wearing a bright red lipstick & swallowing their cum? I'm fucki... pissed off but somewhat happy too I think? Tom

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Really a bad ending

not a lot started by talking about a rape and finished that way to but by then it did nt sound like it was rape would have sounded better when it happened rather than as a confession. and making a raped woman suddenly become a whore and a slut is not my idea of good writing.

the wife has been giving the husband blowjobs and rubbing her finger on his anus for a few days then started to push her finger in his ass while blowing him. he's starting to like it and she added a second finger. this has now been going on for a few weeks. her phone rings on a Thursday night and all she says is yes after having the phone to her ear for 5 minutes. her husband asks who was that? she said it was the guy that fucked me with the 12 inch cock. some how he has my phone number and she then says and our address, the wants you to pick him up from the airport tomorrow. he says he is going to fuck us both all weekend... and your going to suck his cock as he drives our car back home....