All Comments on 'Wife with Single Young Guy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I was looking forward to showing this story to my relutant wife. However neither of us would ever be into the violence of a woman getting hit. Perhaps an ending more sexual would improve an otherwise interesting story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

The premise of the husband sending the wife off to a swingers' club with a hot younger guy piqued my interest. However, this turned out to be about degradation and abuse. A filthy place, the woman getting hit - I have not the slightest interest in that.

The extensive use of run-on sentences makes it a bit harder to read.

I don't know exactly why it's in BDSM, because it doesn't seem to fit that at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
very good

Loved the story. Loved the ending, it helped to capitalize on her inner conscience keep writing.

stillaonewomanmstillaonewomanmover 7 years ago
Belongs in the trash

If I let my wife go to a club like that with a stranger I would be divorced in a heartbeat. I hope she gets her mind back and does divorce him.

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