by sloanforfun
I was looking forward to showing this story to my relutant wife. However neither of us would ever be into the violence of a woman getting hit. Perhaps an ending more sexual would improve an otherwise interesting story.
The premise of the husband sending the wife off to a swingers' club with a hot younger guy piqued my interest. However, this turned out to be about degradation and abuse. A filthy place, the woman getting hit - I have not the slightest interest in that.
The extensive use of run-on sentences makes it a bit harder to read.
I don't know exactly why it's in BDSM, because it doesn't seem to fit that at all.
Loved the story. Loved the ending, it helped to capitalize on her inner conscience keep writing.
If I let my wife go to a club like that with a stranger I would be divorced in a heartbeat. I hope she gets her mind back and does divorce him.