by desireinu
It left me hanging....Is this the first chapter? Are there going to be more? I hope so.
A couple is together in a hotel room. They have sex. That happens even in my world. Ho hum...
Where in the hell is the revenge? Revenge for WHAT? Did he throw her ass out in the street? What?!!
the sex was ok, but I'm not sure where the revenge comes into play...or on who. I checked your other submission but it doesn't seem to fit with this story. Please elucidate. thankyou
that arguement was enough to cheat? great marriage, given what was written
I saw no connection between the 2 stories other than Ryan's name. Apparently the wife is a spoiled brat of a slut who thinks an argument is enough to go out and become a whore? More background information was needed to make sense of this. Hopefully she wasn't allowed to return home.
The opening statement directs the reader to a prior submission in Group on regarding a first 3some for Sweety. It presumably provides background useful in gaining a fuller understanding of THIS later tale. IT DOES NOT! Both stories are marginally adequate, and DO involve the same couple, but are totally different!
'couple' , in THIS tale, is NOT Hubby with Sweety! Hubby is presumably home, in the doghouse ... oops, the 'cuckhouse!' but doesn't enter the picture in any other way!
she already has plans A, B, & C logged in. TK U MLJ LV NV
What would she have done if he had been unfaithful? Pulled a train. What a wonderful woman! NOT!
Her husband divorced her. What a dumb slut. What an idiotic story.
Now we know the husband did not convince her to do something she did not want. He simply recognized that he married a slut.
You did a good job on the sex scene but what is the rest of the story?
What was the fight about? What happened after she cheated?