All Comments on 'Wife's Revenge on Husband'

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kilcannonkilcannonover 19 years ago
first chapter?

It left me hanging....Is this the first chapter? Are there going to be more? I hope so.

Joe_DinkJoe_Dinkover 19 years ago
Ho hum

A couple is together in a hotel room. They have sex. That happens even in my world. Ho hum...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
WHAT revenge?

Where in the hell is the revenge? Revenge for WHAT? Did he throw her ass out in the street? What?!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
zero

zero with a small z

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
errr, is that it

the sex was ok, but I'm not sure where the revenge comes into play...or on who. I checked your other submission but it doesn't seem to fit with this story. Please elucidate. thankyou

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
what brought that about ?

she has issues w husband, why? and then...?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
that was enough?

that arguement was enough to cheat? great marriage, given what was written

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
not much of a story

I saw no connection between the 2 stories other than Ryan's name. Apparently the wife is a spoiled brat of a slut who thinks an argument is enough to go out and become a whore? More background information was needed to make sense of this. Hopefully she wasn't allowed to return home.

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 12 years ago
Preface??? Makes no sense!

The opening statement directs the reader to a prior submission in Group on regarding a first 3some for Sweety. It presumably provides background useful in gaining a fuller understanding of THIS later tale. IT DOES NOT! Both stories are marginally adequate, and DO involve the same couple, but are totally different!

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 12 years ago
BTW

'couple' , in THIS tale, is NOT Hubby with Sweety! Hubby is presumably home, in the doghouse ... oops, the 'cuckhouse!' but doesn't enter the picture in any other way!

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
AFTER AND BEFORE A FAKE FIGHT

she already has plans A, B, & C logged in. TK U MLJ LV NV

BfreetorunBfreetorunalmost 11 years ago
So, she fucked around just because of an argument with her husband?

What would she have done if he had been unfaithful? Pulled a train. What a wonderful woman! NOT!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Epic stupidity

Her husband divorced her. What a dumb slut. What an idiotic story.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Don't

Don't ever annoy a whore, they'll just become worse whores.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Now we know the husband did not convince her to do something she did not want. He simply recognized that he married a slut.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

You did a good job on the sex scene but what is the rest of the story?

What was the fight about? What happened after she cheated?

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