All Comments on 'Wild Flower Ch. 13'

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Petef52Petef52about 6 years ago
Nicholas and Adrian??!!??

Please get this properly edited, using random names in the most important love scene is unforgivable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

OMG, I hope Christian isn't one of the rapist son cause I'm having a bad feeling about this.

I also don't trust bredson about his obsession over Miguel. I wonder what he would do when he finds out Miguel is taken.

I feel pity for Carter

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 6 years ago
BEST VALENTINE'S DAY GIFT EVER...OH WHAT AFUCK,WHAT AMOMENT,..WHAT ALOVE??

well well well...my best scene in wild flower,how Angel has submitted in,how Chris has taken it lyk aman hahahahaha man King Van u really work..That possessiveness of Chris'am trying to survive where the only thing i want to do is make love to u'...Uhhmmmm(do u think i can allow King van to leave without fuc......me??,nope)Hmmm petef i love it when the other stars are brought back,it makes remember those hot hot hot stories...Well i actually felt bad when Miguell was seeing lambert and other men..But thanks uhmmm he recieved it hot after calming down,man Chris can fuck just like King va....Uhmmm

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 6 years ago

Chris the man.Hehehe and when i remember the way they have rode...God i wana experience it

Actually i felt bad for carter,sure i wanted him to know but i was hurt the way he was broke..let him love George,its bad to go in valentine without alover,..Man i love this guy

when did he become Chris Boyfriend???Did i miss that???..Uhmmm??

...Now look at afool lyk Antonio,trying to kill our Angel...huh such ahippo as dull as ahyena...Yah he deserved being stabbed lying helpless on that sharp edge..PIG,now let him meet his frnds in Hell...Instead of an apology,he acts smart...Afool with wings i hate him lyk i hate prince william of Unbroken

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 6 years ago

just busy alot but i get time for my van becoz i love him and NO ONE CAN CHANGE IT..happy valentines,i got my gift already..thats my story,W.F,How about u???

theme song love harder-Ariana Grande...Post soon van,i love u my king,T.C.K.O.W/K.H.S

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haaaa..let me hope Felix and Jackson wont become aprob to us???!!!...So the next fool is the Millitary Hector???Huh...The game is on

vanalasvanalasabout 6 years agoAuthor
Hey guys.

How are you all doing and happy valentine. Hope you are all okay? Thank you for your great love for this story. I really love you a lot. Thank you so much.

Josranvictor, thanks a million

Chancem77Chancem77about 6 years ago
Awesome Chapter

Just got around to reading this today and it was great. Keep up the good work.

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