by vanalas
OMG this story was simply the best and I will miss Miguel like crazy. I can't wait for him to be back real soon. I will miss u too vanalas, so much, especially your lovely stories which are amazing in all walks of life. I understand u because studies are really important and require total concentration.
Take care dear! but I hope u will be back soon!
Please keep writing. This story is so damn good. I wish we didn’t have to wait a whole week for the next chapter. Please think about releasing at least 2 chapters a week
it's a pity that I was right about Carter and Brandon. but Miguel don't have the right to dictate who Brian must love. I'm said that Brian betrayed Miguel. Before I wish Miguel dies but now he must live and his deeds must never be known. I can't wait for Miguel to kill Brandon when he finds out the truth.
I completely understand you my love..Even me too iam really busy with tests and next week am having exams,we come back home late and thats why i read and comment late my sweety...I know am going to be hurt especially that word ''MONTHS WITHOUT POSTING'' but i know u care for us and u also have alife whose future u determine when studying just lyk me..so why would i prefer entertainment at the cost of u my Vanalas?? if i do then am not avanaholic..And on that note,please vanalas gives ur contacts on social media,i want to be your friend on FB,follower on twitter,everything so please help me....And when u get time atleast post my love,okey?
its all due to this pig that pushed pablo off the building that all these nosensical things are happening.I hate brandon..imagine Pablo just lost his life in such adirty game..Its because of that fool brandon..Its becoz of Brandon that our love of Chriguell is diminishing,yes had it not been him,even that frong carter wouldnt get achance to get his filthy hands on our man,how dare he??...Its becoz of brandon that we are having sleepless nights,its becoz of brandon that Miggy is no longer making love with Our man,its becoz of brandon that Christian sees Mig in anegative and positive picture,its becoz of that killer that Pablo the nosy father in law is dead,but he would be good in future...Now how much do u think i hate bradon?? dont even try to estimate is 720 degrees and 101%,i hate him and yes..Let Xim cheat over and over again
How dare he enjoys the warmth of our man??? huh??? how dare he consoles our man pretending to care,how dare he lays those filthy hands on the body of the man we love??? huh?? carter is really diarrhoe..He even has the guts to say rubbish to Daniel so as to subbortage Miggy??? hahaha i've never been mad..I wanted to kill by removing his gut,i wonder how he even came to be miguel's brother..Looks like he came from genes of foolishness while LA DON came from pure genes...i wanted Mig to slap him in the scene where he found him with Chris,i wanted him to have amark in that ugly face,GOD I HATE HIM..how dare he looks at Mig dirtly as if he is asaint?? i hate the character carter and marcus those foolets,DAMN THEM
i alittle bit hate Chris for accusing Angel atleast in all people he should know Mig and be there for him..I lyked the words that Angel told him in the scene where he found him with carter...Thats when i have known that am jealousy,how dare carter lay in Chris's arms?? huh..How Chris went to Mig's house and was blaming him,..Man i hope carter isnt bewitching our man..Becoz in the whole of this chapter Chris was afool except when he punched brandom,hehehe man i wanted him to pour brandon's brains and kill him right there but......plz reconcile them please Van plz....Brian was too much,he deserved that slap..i dont judge him if he loves felix...his choice matters........Wowoow bye bye Hector,ooh the man was ahard nut to crack,,eeh,he even hurt mark?? and wanted to kill Angel!!,bye hector,hope u enjoy company with spencer...Haha brandon hugging Miggy!! uhh??? brandon's dream come true...Van i love u please reply tn us my love..Take care my Prince
why do I have this feeling that Miguel would forgive Brian and that Felix would forget about his revenge against la Don. I also feel that Carter would hit the bottom of the rock and that Brandon may die or disappears. I would like Miguel to forgive Daniel or else.....
This story is simply the best I tell you guys. I can picture Miguel and I support him big time. His character is simply the best ever. He's strong, courageous, a tough nut to crack, fierce and so damn sexy. I'm gonna miss his character for months like seriously! Come back Darling we love you and take care!
Vanalas I'm gonna miss u and Miguel at the same time seriously. Miguel is something else and I love him so much. I can't wait for his return real soon!
Vanalas thank you souch for bringing such a wonderful story to us! This will always be my top story. Thank you so much dear! I love you.
I am still feeling the passion. Did u guys see how powerful Miguel is? So young and so powerful at the same time! Darren was dumbfounded! I actually loved it so much that I pictured him!
Do u remember, "I don't know how relevant that name is in this part of town!" Hahaha.
"You brag about being a great detective. You should go back inside and find the real killer!" Hahahahahs
Did u guys see how scared the policemen were when LA don threatened them? Hahaha
But actually I felt really sad when Miguel was trying to explain to Chris at the construction site. He loves the guy so much but Chris is a fool for believing everyone else!
And acid would have worked better to wake up Carter from Chris' arms I swear. Who is he to prevent Miguel's plans? I think he is getting on my nerves. Acting as if he is Chris' boyfriend! Brandon was right in telling him that. O wish he had punched his ugly face
Thank you so much for your great love you guys. I really appreciate it a lot. I know you love me and I love you too. You can contact me on the following
WhatsApp: +260972959685 which I use more than others.
Facebook: Van Mwale
oh thanks my lovely man and...Wow vanaholics i missed u where have u been..Let me contact my man and plz dont be jelousy
Maybe it's your exams or maybe it's that time we have to remind you that u late on submission but if it's yo exams please take or the time you want but if it's for reminding you I wish I were around to whoop yo ass till next Tuesday. Still waiting....
hey, great story so far. I need to catch up as I was offline for a bit. Was in the hospital but am back now and I miss reading your stuff. I'm sad to hear that you won't be able to post anything new for a while but education is more important so good luck, do your best, and get back to us as soon as you are able. Best wishes, ~Chance~
to this story before starting a new one!!!!!!!!
I read all of your stories... You are truly amazing.
To be very honest... This one started as drag... And very annoying/cruel Angelo. Yet again am so glad to stick around to finishing.... Was totally hooked and can't wait for many more.