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andrewm57andrewm5710 months ago

Love the story line, but the linguistic effusion occludes the wonderment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The vocabulary has been mentioned several times. Fancy words do not equate to good story telling. If they are a stumbling block for the reader and break the narrative flow then they do not aid the story. That's beside the fact that some of them weren't even used correctly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Lovely .. and man your vocabulary .. shuuu

IaOldTimerIaOldTimerover 6 years ago
Why?

Why is it that when you stumble upon a writer with this skill set, they stop publishing?

honybipolahonybipolaabout 7 years ago
Wow

I got hooked... and I just stumbled on this...you are one hell of a write...

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