All Comments on 'Wilderness Road Ch. 03'

I'm reading the chapters with interest. However, for dramatic purposes, it might be better if you end a chapter with some sort of cliff-hanger, something that suggests the story will continue. In this chapter most of the plot movement takes place about half-way through. While I don't mind an image of a contented wife, to end the chapter there almost gives the feeling that the happy ending finishes the story.