All Comments on 'Wildwood'

The story was hot but the many many errors kept it from being hotter. Did you even read through it once?

Your writing content is improving, nice story. Consider a beautiful, voluptuous wife being selfishly taken in a nc/reluctant scenario while hubby watches or hears about it later. Those are always crowd pleasers and guarantted to get feedback; good bad or ugly.

You do need to re-read this story at least once. I was hard and twitching the whole time even though I lost track of who was doing what because of the poor grammar and typos. Let me say again though that this was a very hot scenario. Please keep writing but do use your spellcheck and proofers.... thx

It would have been blazing hot had it not been for the poor grammar and editing

Very well thought out, but too many typo's and missing words. Keep at it though, you have talent.

I liked it.

Liked the story, grammar was not noticable once I became involved in the story line

...worth a sequel. Normally bad grammar or typos distracts me, but I got absorbed in the story and did not notice that which others complain about.

As a realtor, I take serious offense to the actions of the realtor in the story. She should never, EVER volunteer that her sellers would take less than the list price.

(lol)

very hot

it waz good... wizh it happend 2 me!!!

Great story, definitely in need of a sequel !

Group sex is not my fantasy, but it's a nice story, Jacks. Great intro, and you've got a lot of interesting characters. Keep going, flesh out their back story and really run with it. And I have to say, I'm glad your grammar police don't visit me, if you get gigged on these few boo-boos, I'd get roasted! lol

great story , I really liked it

Enough said?

Where's part 2?? keep up the writing

This is an amazing story that needs a sequel to it!!