All Comments on 'Will I Learn To Love? Ch. 02'

by bigmonkeypie

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Yep 75 ( it's a long way to the top)

Still good, all the way through. there are logic holes you could drive a bus through, but what the hell, this is a Romance.

And my oh My it was Short !!!

Characters, filled out now, are likeable, too likeable perhaps. Where's the " villain of the piece" bound to turn up soon, i hope.

Cheers

Kilroy

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