by NewNaughtyWriter
Great story - love the tension you are building up, can't wait for the next installment
Great story, can't wait for the next instalment. well written as well.
still waiting for the next chapter - you've left us hanging just like your wife :)
You have built up the wife's—and our—anticipation. Please don't keep us hanging, but continue this series.
This unrealistic, silly junk. Didn't like either of them. Maybe they fell off the page? I can only hope. A waste of time to read.
No harm will come to you, don't women hold there emotional side equal to the physical side, you are on lucky suckuh that see is turned on by this.
A blindfold in the bedroom was as far as we can get, then I opend the door...... What are you doing ? .........
Six years and you haven't finished the story yet? Twelve lashes with a wet noodle for you.
Seriously--this is why I hate multiple chapter stories.
Another broken story. This is why I seldom read the first chapter or two of a series.
I was really enjoying this I look forward to the rest of the story
Again, please continue this hot story
I must have first discovered this series over 7 years ago, and enjoyed it very much, asking for a continuation. You have built up the wife's—and our—anticipation. Again, please don't keep us hanging, but continue this series.
Too bad this is a broken, unfinished story. There was a lot of potential here for so many adventures for both of them. There may be some hope to finish the story as I have read some that have gone on for almost 10 years before taking up the next chapters. Such a hot buildup. It is a waste of creative writing talent.