All Comments on 'Will You Love Me 'Til I Die? Ch. 19'

It's time to end this lugubrious and tedious story that as is is miscategorized. The quality of the writing is going down faster than the published chapters. Please... please, end the disaster, while you can still gain some semblance of being tagged as an author of the first order! As more chapters get published, the lesser you are perceived as knowing when to end a story.

I have read this from chapter one. Started out great and I really expected it to be one of the best. As others have said, it has gone on way too long. You keep adding characters, but the process is always the same. Unbelievable that so many people would join in a Pied Piper like procession. I keep hoping the end will come and fulfill the beginning.