by dyck
what ever happened to safe, sane, and having consent? Abuse is not D/s or BDSM.
I would definately find agreement with the previous poster. BDSM is a bond between a Master and a submissive, that is treated with respect. The Dominant and submissive must both respect one another, not fear.... This story shows a lack of understanding for what BDSM truly is and involves. SSC as the prior poster indicated -- Safe Sane Consentual.
Think through your story before you write about a lifestyle.
...Not the way BDSM really is or should be. I for one enjoyed it but would never do something like that without consent in real life.
If I could give it a negative 100, I would. Not a thing arousing or hot about this, just icky.
Bad concept, and piss poor execution! Zero character development and bad narration. This sucks on ice!
The concept is just tacky and to far of the path to be even slightly plausible!
I agree with most comments here. This is not a true representation of a Dom and Sub relationship. So sad I had to come across this story at random. Ruined my evening.
While I do agree that it is not traditional BDSM, I found it very arousing. I love being put in my place sexually by a strong male.