by dsoul
Interesting concept. Great use of evocative phrases (belly of the cloud) etc. keep it up
Like a nun taking off her habir??? That's an image that I can't even begin to imagine. Talk about food for thought!
Unlike other people who commented I didn't get into this one. I found it predictable down to the phone call and justunbelievable - I have to suspend disbelief for a story to really appeal to me. Sorry I can’t be more positive