All Comments on 'Window to a Dream'

by LesLumens

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Please continue

I'm ready for Chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Wonder Story

Hello - This story really got my interest and arousal ! Maybe next time, Alex can show her how to use such a big cock ?? Thank you for your story.

starrkersstarrkersalmost 17 years ago
Nice little tease

Hope there's a part two waiting to see the light of day.

RogueLurkerRogueLurkeralmost 17 years ago
well done

I'm sensing a bit of in-home tech support coming up in her future. Great entry for the contest, Les!

(hmmm - if this comment double posts, I may be in need of tech support myself)

tickledkittytickledkittyalmost 17 years ago
Very nice.

Mmmmm...Every girl needs a neighbor like that. This is a well-written, sexy little romp. Good luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Nice one

I like your style of writing,would have been better if you had made it two or three days before they got it together but never the less a nice one. Luv Jenny Cook

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Never cease to amaze...

Les/Dark, It never ceases to amaze me how well written and readable your stories are. The erotic aspect is always well done, but it seems that the story has much more importance than the "bang". I agree with other posters that this storyline does beg for/lead to a sequel... S.Wolfe

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