All Comments on 'Winner Takes All'

Interesting characters. I wanted it to be longer as the exchanges between the two were well done.

I noticed this is your first submission on this site, though I suspect not your first published work. Very good, not a word out of place, with two very well-fleshed out characters, both of whom are equals in terms of who drives the relationship and, thus, the story. There is a fine line between too much story and not enough, and I think you hit it perfectly. There are certain writers on this site I never miss -- thecelt, DG Hear, harddaysknight, ohio, SweetWitch, jack_straw (LOL), Jake Rivers, a few others. I'll have to add you to my list. Well done!

Look forward to moe submissions from you

lovely, just deliciously lovely

hot and sexy!

i like stories where one of the partners is older,either the man or the woman.where one partner is bold and in charge,and the other needs to learn a needed lesson.in the end love prevails.your story was very believable,a nice touch.brooklyn

NOT even close to a Romance...

i had a naked boxing match with another bisexual male,we fought over an older lady aged 46 she watched as we fought with our cocks erect ..we didn't have any sex for days so we were desperate for her ..after 3 rounds i was winning i had him on the floor twice but in the 4th round he knocked me out..i hope to have a re-match sometime soon..