by CoreyStreber
A lot of erotic stories tend to focus too much on the heat of the moment, and sacrifice build up and character development as a result. Corey did not fall in to this trap. A very hot story, but also a well thought out one. I hope he continues to write. Either sequels to this story, or brand new story lines. There is definitely talent here, I cannot wait to see what else he comes up with =)
Also, slave turned into almost equal partner in crime is definitely one of my long time fetishes/fantasies. Charlotte seems to be fitting that bill quite nicely. Once again, well done. =)
That was really good, can't wait for the next one ! I wouldn't mind a little more humiliation of the losers like a pussy shaving/waxing session, public exhibition, ...