All Comments on 'Winner Takes All: Round 02'

by CoreyStreber

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

I really enjoyed this story. I can't wait for the next.

charlightcharlightover 6 years ago
Thrilling and Smart

A lot of erotic stories tend to focus too much on the heat of the moment, and sacrifice build up and character development as a result. Corey did not fall in to this trap. A very hot story, but also a well thought out one. I hope he continues to write. Either sequels to this story, or brand new story lines. There is definitely talent here, I cannot wait to see what else he comes up with =)

charlightcharlightover 6 years ago
P.S.

Also, slave turned into almost equal partner in crime is definitely one of my long time fetishes/fantasies. Charlotte seems to be fitting that bill quite nicely. Once again, well done. =)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

That was really good, can't wait for the next one ! I wouldn't mind a little more humiliation of the losers like a pussy shaving/waxing session, public exhibition, ...

dirtywhiteboy67dirtywhiteboy67about 3 years ago
5☆s

I'm waiting to read about the next round. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

i know its been a long time but please conclude the series! its so good!

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