All Comments on 'Winning the Game'

Not much by way of characterization but it was still a hot little story. I really enjoyed the concept of the sex competition and already i'm thinking of ways to "borrow" it for my own stories. Mostly, i just wish the action had continued in that vein instead of just setting up another installment. (I'm assuming sequels are planned.)

Well, actually it's rather a sketch than proper story, but still it's quite nice. It would be nice if you would make longer story from it.

This story actually derived from a writing prompt with a 700 word cap. I had to expand on it some to reach the 750 word minimum. Realistically, it would indeed benefit from more beefing up. I will consider a "sequel" with some more meat to it now that I know this has been accepted.

Glad people are enjoying it!

This made me think of things I wished we could have gotten away with, and wish there was more to it also!