All Comments on 'Winter at the Kilgrave Mansion Ch. 01'

Great concept and I'm eager to read more, but your grammar would benefit from a bit of editing. For instance, "your" is possessive and "you're" is a contraction of "you are." Additionally, it's macabre, not macarbe. Otherwise, love the ideas, the first person perspective, and Morty sounds dreamy. Keep writing! :)

Love were your going with this hope u see it through to the end 😉

very good story, I hope that you continue.. it would be interesting if he became more of a woman each time he gets filled with cum.. a nice pussy growing and his cock shrinks

I agree with Brenda. .... the more cumulative she is filled with, the more woman she should become. .... but she doesn't have to be straight, although falling deeply in reciprocated love with her friend would be so wonderful. It nearly every T-girl's dream to 1. Become who they are, inside and out and 2. Find someone to share their heart...and body....with.

I'm not usually big on the science fiction stories but, this was hot. I wish I had that potion.

A great story well conceived and executed. More please